Alterations.

Lately i have been going through the paintings i have already done and have been trying to lok for errors and/or ways to improve upon what i have already done, and i have found many finishing touches i can add.I have changed a great deal of this piece. I have made some of the buildings seem less uniform for starters, as well and making a smoke trail where the airship is going.
Here i made a simple blue background for the outside world through the backdoor as well as redoing all the faces on all the characters (Which you can't see in this picture with this resolution) I also put two more fans above the band to help with composition.
And finally i finished this orthographic of my boat, including annotations about how the ship works to make it look more like a set of plans for the building of the ship and thus makes it look a lot more professional. The font however may be a little bit difficult to read, so i should include a translated version.